Wednesday, June 27, 2012

Visual Dare #11 - Mystique

I am totally loving Angela Goff's photo prompts for her Visual Dare series. Just beautiful.  If you're a writer, you should check in once in a while. They spark the imagination.  Here's mine for this week:



Rashad seethed at how they despoiled her, exposing her face to common men’s lewd stares.

“Cover her” he commanded.

They adjusted her niqab. Her golden eyes, more vibrant than the dinars he had paid with, met his with familiar defiance. Grateful she did not recognize the boy who once trespassed in her garden, he led her in silence beyond the gates where his camel waited to return her to the king’s sanctuary. 

They said the man who recovered the princess could name his reward. He hoped so. He had waited six years for her, aching to kiss those lips again.

100 words

4 comments:

  1. YOWZAS!! This entry rocks, and for so many reasons! I love how you left the tale hanging on a hook --- so many questions to be answered! Must know more!!

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  2. I love the reuniting pasts, definitly reads like the blurb of an amazing novel

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  3. I love mentioning her lips when you can't see them in the picture, just piques the imagination, as do your beautiful words!

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  4. Stacy, a wonderfully evocative scene!

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